Dusk Peterson ([info]duskpeterson) wrote in [info]orig_slavefic,
2008-07-02 08:52:00
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FIC: The Fool

Title: The Fool.
Author: Dusk Peterson
Where to find me: Website, blog, duskpetersonupdate (e-mail list with plain-text posts of my fiction), duskpetersonbooks (e-mail list with announcements only).
Categories: Original fiction. Male/male erotic attraction. Fantasy. Any feedback welcome.
Rating: PG-13.
Summary: He'd abducted him, bedded him, and taught him every position he knew. So why wasn't the fool grateful?
Warnings: Boilerplate warning for all my stories. Also, one of the main characters is a boy of unspecified age. There are no explicit scenes.

I pulled him off from the execution sword at the last moment. Was pleased afterwards with my cleverness – a grateful bed-slave is more likely to entertain.

Tags: author: duskpeterson, fiction, male owner, male slave

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[info]angiepen

July 2 2008, 17:50:14 UTC 3 years ago

I liked this one. Stories where the narrator sees himself as a villain of some sort, and perhaps even is at the beginning, but ends up being the hero without fully getting it always do something for me. I'm not sure what, but I like them. :)

Angie

[info]duskpeterson

July 6 2008, 02:13:55 UTC 3 years ago

"Stories where the narrator sees himself as a villain of some sort, and perhaps even is at the beginning, but ends up being the hero without fully getting it always do something for me."

You'll like some of my other stories, then. :)

[info]libertas_atis

July 2 2008, 19:53:54 UTC 3 years ago

I really enjoyed this. It was witty and ironic and rather sad all at the same time. I loved the way that you drew the developing relationship so lightly and that your hero had no idea what a hero he was, or how important he had become to "his boy".

Lovely story written by a true master *g*

*Hugs*

Lucie x

[info]duskpeterson

July 6 2008, 02:14:37 UTC 3 years ago

Thank you. :)

[info]shimmertree

July 4 2008, 04:17:51 UTC 3 years ago

I really liked the style of this. I was drawn in by the narrator's voice. Of course, the romantic in me was hoping for a different outcome. *g* (Day 101--the rescue...LOL)

It was neat, I was in doubt until the very end about which he chose.

[info]duskpeterson

July 6 2008, 02:12:30 UTC 3 years ago

"Day 101--the rescue...LOL"

:)

Well, if it's any comfort, I write that type of fic too. I just leave my reader guessing as to which type any given story is.

[info]pierrot_dreams

July 6 2008, 00:21:54 UTC 3 years ago

I once had a literature professor who demonstrated how "The Great Gatsby" is the perfect novel. Every chapter is carefully constructed; the pacing is perfect. I think this is probably the condensed version of the perfect slavefic. Just wonderful.

[info]duskpeterson

July 6 2008, 02:15:04 UTC 3 years ago

*Blushes madly*.

[info]lubicino

July 11 2008, 16:43:43 UTC 3 years ago

I really love this fic. I read it awhile ago, and I remember going back to reading it every other month or so. The style's really great and it's so consistent. I especially loved the voice, the main character, and how the boy was described. The point of view is funny but also believable; it's just really beautiful. I cried during the last part, when the warrior was leaving the boy.

Are any of your other stories like this? ^^ I'm a bit of a vanilla reader when it comes to N/C, and I tried to read Debt Slave (Debt Price? sorry!) but I got the queases.

Thank you for sharing this story!

[info]duskpeterson

July 13 2008, 02:49:33 UTC 3 years ago

So did its beta reader. :) Most of the story (you will find this hard to believe) is G-rated. A reviewer recently said about my darkfic, "Dark, very, but there's this smidgen of light in every cavern Dusk throws a reader, and the brightness of that light is practically overwhelming by the time you get to the end of the novel, and it is like crawling to the opening of a cavern." I was very pleased to have her put it that way, because that's precisely the sort of effect I aim toward.

Anyway, for my stories without much (or any) onscreen violence, I recommend O Most Unthankful (be warned it's chan), Eternally Divided (if you can get through my attempts to replicate Dante's style of writing), the Darkling Plain series (gen and het), and Blood Vow (gen; I've just started serializing the novel at this comm; it's Friends-locked).
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